Communications Need to Stand Out – Ford Escort Seller Shows How

If you need a lesson on how to make your communications stand out, the person who wrote the classified ad for this Ford Escort–“the most ballingest car ever”–shows the rest of us how.

Here are some gems:

This well-maintained and fully restored beauty is a salvage title. It was bought out of an insurance pool after getting into a tiny fender bender (i.e. vicious car cock fight. . . which it won. . . with metal and brawn).

This one-of-a-kind ZX2 coupe is to the limit. And it takes no prisoners.

And the best:

The right front fender was dented, but then replaced by a cadre of men who were born in garages and bottle-fed Penzoil.

Read the whole ad at hooniverse.

Impartiality as the Message

 

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Impartiality in the primary

Impartiality was the key message of a press release and blog post I wrote for the Tenth Dems. It is a tough message to work on.

Messaging is usually aligned with passion, or at least enthusiasm. This message was about, well, a more cool detachment. That, to me, is a tough sell.

But the message was important to our organization. One key challenge we have as a group is that in a primary, the organization is accused of bias for one candidate or another. Sometimes, the actions of key members of our group can provoke outrage from some of the campaigns. And we really want a Democrat to win in November, so we want the process to play out during the primary season. Impartiality is not an easy message to get excited about, but it is important to Tenth Dems now.

I tried to use some humor to put across the impartiality message.

In fact, the term “smoke-filled room” came from the nomination of a Republican who is widely considered to be one of the worst presidents in history. While he was a bumbling and ineffective leader, members of his administration by and large gave away huge amounts of the country’s petroleum reserve to Big Oil, profiting themselves in the process. While you might have had another name in mind, that president was Warren G. Harding.

Did it work? I hope so.

Well, read the rest of the piece and let me know.

Thanks,

pk